Foundation Portfolio - Celeste Adams
Saturday, 25 February 2017
Task 10: Evaluation Script (Second Attempt)
Evaluation
Script:
1. In what way does your media product use, develop or
challenge forms and conventions of real media products?
The shots used in the opening sequence of my film
"Sub-Rosa" were inspired by the title sequence of the film
"Seven" which depicts a character creating an intricately detailed
scrapbook. I hoped that my replication of this iconic cinematic sequence
would help to replicate the eerie and unsettling atmosphere of successful
films belonging to the thriller and horror genres. The level of detail shown in
the scrapbook is a highly effectively method of giving the audience an insight
into the mental state of the character being portrayed. In the film
"Seven", this sequence clarifies some of the motives of the serial
killer, and that he fits into the classification of an "Organised
offender", which creates suspense from the very start of the film.
Although the opening shots of my media product are less sinister in nature than
the ones used in the film "seven", I hoped that this sequence of
shots would create a level of suspicion towards the female character shown, as
she becomes the main suspect for the series of murders in my film.
When researching the opening sequences of films, I
discovered that there is a conventional order of titles:” Studio logo,
Studio/Producer presents, Starring (Main Actor), Title of film, Cameraperson,
Editor, Composer, Screenwriter, Producer and Director”. I have used this order
in my own film’s title sequence to ensure that my own media product has a level
of realism and a professional finish to it, by having accurate details such as
the order of appearance of a film’s opening titles.
Although the order of my films titles is conventional,
I chose to present these titles using two colours in the font, as opposed to
the conventional use of one colour for text. I intended that the white and red colours of the
titles connote themes of innocence mixed with blood and danger, foreboding the
tone and plot of the film
The antagonist of thriller and horror films is usually
male, but I have broken this convention by making the main suspect a young
adult female who better fits the description of the victims in most horror/
thriller movies. I hoped that breaking this convention would further increase
the tension in my film, as female characters are often stereotypically
considered to be pure and innocent prey rather than a dangerous predator within
this genre.
The music that I chose to have playing over the
opening sequence of my film is also conventional in the sense that the eerie
tone and minor key of the song appropriately emphasises the unsettling and
mysterious atmosphere often created in horror and thriller films. The fact that
the music used also has religious connotations also hints to the audience that
the murder cases within the film are linked to the secretive occurrences within
a religious organisation.
Most protagonists of horror and thriller films are
Caucasian males, which my film conforms to by having two young male adults as
the police investigators who are dealing with the murder cases in the film.
2. How does your media product represent particular
social groups?
As I have only created the opening sequence of a film,
my actual media product contains a very limited representation of different
social groups. This is mainly because I had a limited sample of people to
recruit my actors from. Therefore, the female suspect and the two male police
investigators are of similar ages (teenagers/ young adults) and Caucasian
ethnicities.
The two police investigators in my film represent the
differences between representations of age in my film. The character “Brian
Smith”, who is the older, more experienced of the two characters, is presented
as being more confident and professional due to his superior age than his
co-worker “John Miller”. The older police investigator is presented as being
superior in confidence and experience as he remains seated at his desk
throughout the opening scene and summons his co-worker into his office using a
the telephone to contact a secretary. The use of imperatives in the character
Brian Smith’s speech and the way that he chastises the younger investigator
John Miller for making a comment about the age and gender of the plot’s main
suspect suggests a feeling of superiority in the older and higher class
character. This representation would appeal to the young adults in my film’s
target audience, as they would be in similar positions to the younger John
Miller character as they enter the world of independence and a working
environment where they may be treated harshly by their superiors who assert
dominance over new employees to maintain any status they have built up over
time.
3. What kind of media institution might distribute
your media product and why?
The
film studio “Universal” might distribute my film as they have been producing
horror films since the 1930s and some of their previously released successful
films belonging to the thriller and horror genres include “Jaws” (1975),
“Crimson Peak” (2015), and “Psycho” (1960).
My
film was also greatly influenced and inspired by the opening sequence and plot
line of the psychological thriller film “Se7en” (1995). Because of the
similarities between my film and “Seven”, my film might be distributed by the
media institution “New Line Cinema” who
have also released the successful horror film “A Nightmare on Elm Street”
(1984) which features similar themes of morality in young adult characters,
much like my own film.
My
film could also be distributed by an indie film institution with a low
production cost as a small cast and very little special effects or CGI is
needed to create the psychological horror elements of my film. Low budget
productions are often found to be the most effective in the thriller and horror
genres, as it adds a sense of realism to the film, heightening the effect on
the audience. A good example of an effective low budget horror movie is “The
Blair Witch Project” (1999) which only had a budget of $60,000 but produced a
box office of $248.6 million.
After
its initial release, my film could also be distributed by TV channels such as
Film 4 and subscription based streaming services like Netflix and Amazon Prime,
as these have increased in popularity over the past few years, and may gain a
wider audience after the films initial release in cinemas than it might in DVD
sales, which declines as online media begins to replace forms of traditional
media distribution.
4. Who would be the audience for your media product?
Films that are
similar to my media product such as “Seven” and “A Nightmare on Elm Street”
gained an “18” rating from the BBFC. However, I think that this rating may be
too high for a psychological thriller/ horror film like my own. Therefore, I
looked on the British Board of Film Classification’s website to see the
criteria for the different classifications to see whether this would affect the
audience for my media product. As films like “The Blair Witch Project” that
focus on the psychological rather than gory aspects of the horror genre gained
a lower rating of “15”, this might be a more suitable rating for my film.
According to the statements on the BBFC’s website, my film could even gain a
12a rating “as long as horror sequences are not too frequent or sustained and
the overall tone is not too disturbing”.
According to Young
and Rubicam's classifications, the target audience for my film
"Sub-Rosa" would fit into the demographic of "Explorers who are “seekers
of adventure, individualism and discovery”. This is because people who enjoy horror
and thriller films are often hoping to experience an adrenaline rush or to have
new, unique responses to the themes presented in these genres.
According to the uses
and gratifications theory, audiences will actively seek out media products for
personal or social gratification, so my film’s target audience would be
attracted to my film by the promise of experiencing adrenaline and suspense
from the mysteries and unusual events presented in the film’s plot. This may be
in order to satisfy a need for excitement and danger in an otherwise ordinary
life that the individual may have.
I believe that the main audience for my media product would belong to the
Mosaic UK classification of "J41- Disconnected Youth" or "K47-
Streetwise Singles” because both of these classifications consist of young
adults struggling to find employment after moving out from the family home.
This demographic would be the most reliant on using media products for
escapism, and would often choose to watch a film belonging to the horror or
thriller genre as this creates a sense of excitement and risk that young adults
can't easily and safely experience in real life.
However, as shown by
my earlier analysis of BFI data on genre and classification, the target
audience for horror films is much broader than one might expect. Therefore, the
main demographic of the audience for my film "Sub-Rosa" could also
include the Mosaic UK classifications "F25- Dependable Me" and "G27-
Thriving Independence". The classification "F25" consists of
"mature owners" working in intermediate occupations. This older
demographic might be more interested in horror and thriller films to satisfy a
need for intellectual stimulation with the complex plot lines often involved in
mysterious thriller films. This older audience would also have a greater
understanding of psychological elements and complex plot developments than
young adults, so may be able to greater appreciate any referential codes
(Barthes Narrative Codes Theory) within the media text. Both of these
classifications would also be less reliant on these genres for escapism, but
would have greater expendable income than the classifications of
"J41" and "K47", meaning that they would be more likely to
spend money on seeing thriller and horror films in the cinema.
According to the social classification system, I believe that the main
demographic for my film "Sub-Rosa" would be in the groups
"C1","C2" and "D". This is an area classed as
lower middle class and upper working class. This range seems like a logical
target audience for my film, as they would have enough expendable income to
watch movies in the cinema, but would have a certain need for escapism or
excitement in a life of regular employment for income, which they may seek from
genres such as horror and thriller.
5. How did you attract/address your audience?
The main attraction of my film is the
enigma codes presented in the opening scenes of the film. One of the main
reasons why an audience would choose to watch a film belonging to the thriller
and psychological horror genres is to be presented with a complex mystery within
the film’s plot that would provide mental stimulation and a sense of excitement
that might otherwise be lacking in their everyday life.
According to Blumler and Katz’s “uses and
gratifications theory” (1974), audiences are active consumers of media
products, and select certain media products to satisfy their specific needs.
For the audience of thriller and horror products like my film, the attraction
would be to satisfy a need to experience adrenaline and to be brought out of
their comfort zone, adding new levels of excitement to their life.
An audience might also be attracted to my
film because it explores themes of power and safety within society which is an
issue closely linked to an adolescent audience’s fears as they enter an adult
life of independence.
I tried to address my audience by using
actors of the same age as my main target audience demographic in the opening
sequence of my film. I hoped that this early introduction of characters
belonging to a similar age and ethnicity as my target audience would increase
the engagement of my film’s narrative, giving the audience a greater interest
and emotional connection with the characters, thus encouraging them to watch
the entirety of my media product.
During my research and planning I also
created a rough draft of a film poster, which could be used as part of an
online advertising campaign to promote my media product, alongside traditional
methods of advertising such as displaying this poster in cinemas and on the
side of buses. These methods of advertising would first present the enigmas
within my film to the audience, attracting them to see the film in order to
gain the resolutions of the mysteries within the narrative.
6. What have you learnt about technologies from the
process of constructing this product?
To film the opening sequence of my film I
chose to use my own Sony Cyber-shot DSC-HX9V camera instead of the Sony HD
cameras provided by my sixth form’s media studies department. This meant that I
had greater flexibility when choosing where and when to film, as the cameras provided
by the sixth form could only be loaned for short amount of times and used on or
near the site of the building. Using my own camera also meant that I had the
advantage of not having to learn how to use another device. Instead, I could
begin filming, making use of my camera’s functions and settings straight away,
without wasting time attempting to learn how to use a new device. As my own
camera is also of a similar quality to those offered by my sixth form, my
footage still had a relatively high level of quality which made the editing
process much easier and more effective than if I had struggled with technical
issues from using a different, unfamiliar recording device.
I began the process of editing my footage using
the software Adobe Premiere on the computers in my sixth form’s media editing
suite. As I was not given the opportunity to edit when working on my
preliminary task, this was my first time using this software, and I quickly
learned that aspects of my footage that I did not want to use could be removed
using the “Razor” tool when the footage is placed on the editing timeline.
One of the issues I had encountered when
filming the first scene of my media product was that because I was filming
outside on a winter evening, there was a lack of light once the sun had set.
This resulted in some of my footage being too dark and of a noticeably poorer
quality than the rest of the scene. To resolve this, I learned how to use the
effect “fast colour corrector” which allows you to alter the exposure, brightness
and key colours of the footage that the effect is applied to. I used this
effect in the first edit of my media project to increase the brightness on the
scenes filmed with poor lighting, and to give some of my video clips a red
tinge in order to add to the eerie atmosphere in the opening sequence of my
film.
When editing my footage, in order to
ensure that the different shots blended together smoothly and naturally as if
they belong next to each other in a sequence, I decided to add “cross dissolve”
transitions, which made adjacent shots blend into each other, discreetly making
the footage appear to be connected and belong together.
As I was creating the opening sequence of
a film, I needed to include the film’s opening title sequence. To achieve this,
I inserted titles over particular sections of footage. I quickly learned that
to insert a title into an adobe premiere pro project, you have to select
“file”, then “new” and finally, “title”. At this stage, the new title could be
positioned onto the editing timeline and I could edit the content and style of
the text accordingly.
As I later made the decision to add a
second scene to the opening sequence of my film, I had to find an effective way
of integrating the new scene into the old footage. To do this whilst
maintaining the eerie and mysterious atmosphere of my film, I decided to
download some stock footage of white noise or static and to use this in-between
the shots of the old, first scene, and footage of the new scene with the police
inspectors.
The final stage of constructing my product
was to upload my video to YouTube. Although I had never uploaded anything to
YouTube before, I found this is a relatively straightforward process that only
requires you to drag your video onto the uploading screen of your own channel.
The most complex aspect of uploading the video was ensuring that I exported my
adobe premiere project in a format that is of a relatively small file size in
order to minimise uploading time, that is supported by YouTube and that will
not compromise the quality of the video.
7. Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you
feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product?
When working on my preliminary task I
experienced multiple issues with unfair work distribution, communication issues
and time limits and constraints that resulted in issues regarding meeting
deadlines. This led me to make the decision to work alone when creating my
final product
Planning
and filming my preliminary task taught me the importance of continuity within a
film and the importance of conforming to the 180 degree rule, which is a
cinematography guideline which states that:
“Two characters in a scene should maintain the
same left/right relationship to one another.” (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y4wX_dmh8_g).
When
planning and filming my preliminary task, I learned how to create and integrate
a match on action into my footage, to show an item being passed between two
characters. I replicated this technique twice in the opening sequence of my
film. The fist match on action shows the female character sticking a hand-drawn
image of a rose into her scrapbook during the title sequence. The second match
on action in my film was more obvious, as it showed the case file being passed
between the two police inspectors in the second scene of the opening sequence.
As
I worked in a group for my preliminary task, I was not given the opportunity to
film or edit any footage for the project, and was left to act in the
production. This was far from idea as it meant that I was at a disadvantage
when creating my final product. As I had never used adobe premiere pro to edit
footage, I had to learn how to use this software as quickly as possible, which
drastically impacted the efficiency of my post-production process.
Monday, 30 January 2017
Tuesday, 17 January 2017
Monday, 16 January 2017
Editing
When I went to create second edit of my media production, I needed to locate my old footage from AS to incorporate into the new footage filmed on the 13/01/2017. This created some problems, as the change in technology in the Media editing suite meant that all files created last year were archived in a hard-drive stored in a separate building. This meant that once I had obtained the hard-drive, I had to look through all of the folders on it, only to discover that the file containing my edited footage from last year was saved onto one of the old mac computers that had been removed from the media editing suite, and thus inaccessible. To overcome this problem, I used online file converters to convert the finished first edit of my media project last year on YouTube into an mp4 file that I could then edit alongside my new footage in adobe premiere.
As my old footage was converted from YouTube, this limited the amount I could edit the footage I had filmed last year. As working from this converted footage was more convenient than locating the original video clips at home and postponing the editing process, I had to find a way to incorporate the old footage with the new whilst maintaining the correct order of titles and having continuity across the different font type and styles used throughout the title sequence. Firstly, to create a new title, I had to click on the icon that resembles a dog-eared piece of paper located at the bottom of the section of the screen that displays the imported footage. This allows you to create different items,so by selecting "New Item", and then "Title", I was able to create new titles to go over the new footage and to replace the titles located on old footage that had been cut from the first edit of the opening sequence of my film "sub-rosa".
Above is an example of the Title creation screen. As my new footage introduced two new actors (playing the roles of police investigators"), it was crucial that the new titles matched the style used over the old footage, in order to maintain continuity and a sense of professionalism. I could change the style of the font using the different example tiles at the bottom of the "Title" screen, and the font size and type could be changed using the two drop down menus on the left side of the top toolbar of the screen.
To make sure that the titles remained in the correct order, to comply with the codes and conventions of film opening sequences, I copied a list of the correct title order and kept this on one side of the computer screen when editing, allowing me to cross off the titles once they had been successfully integrated into the second edit of the opening sequence of my film.
To maintain the style of the titles, you can select the option "Duplicate" after right-clicking on one of the other titles, located in the top right section of the screen that contains the imported footage, audio and visuals. Once duplicating the first title I had made to go over my new footage, all that was needed was to edit the text and position, before renaming the title and placing it on the second video track in the editing timeline, over the section of footage I want it to appear on.
Once applied to the area of the timeline that I want the title to appear over the footage at, the length of time that the title would appear on the screen by selecting one end of the rectangle representing the title and moving the ends until the size of the title's representation on the timeline amounts to roughly four seconds.
After the title was made to appear only for four seconds on the screen, I needed to apply transitions to make the titles appear and disappear from the on-screen footage. I did this by selecting the folder entitled "video transitions" under the tab labelled "effects" in the bottom left section of the editing screen. Once opened, a list of different types of transitions appears underneath the "video transitions" folder in the bottom left section of the screen. By selecting the option "dissolves", a further list of dissolve transitions is displayed. As dissolve transitions seem the most natural and least obtrusive effect offered by the options available in adobe premiere, I chose to apply "cross dissolves" to the beginning and ends of most of the footage and titles in my film, simply by dragging them from the bottom left corner of the screen onto the appropriate section of the timeline.
Friday, 13 January 2017
Thursday, 12 January 2017
Task 5: Script/ Screenplay Final Draft
[FADE IN]:
An artificially lit office is
shown. Ordinary office stationary is seen, neatly organised alongside generic
office furniture. The space lacks personality, save for one picture on the wall
next to the office's computer. Police investigator BRIAN
SMITH is sat behind the office's desk. As a man in the late prime
of his career, Smith is in his late 40s, and seems to have been aged by the
importance of his position. As a man of great importance, he has an air of
cold, impersonal professionalism. Smith is shown to be organising paperwork and
typing on the office's computer before picking up the office phone in swift,
efficient movements.
[THE CAMERA FOCUSES ON SMITH IN A MEDIUM SHOT, SHOWING THE DESK FROM ABOVE THE WAIST AND A LIMITED VIEW OF THE WIDER OFFICE]
SMITH: *speaking into the office phone* He can come in now.
[CAMERA FOCUSES ON THE VIEW OF THE OFFICE DOOR FROM BEHIND SMITH'S DESK.]
One younger police investigator enters the office. He is dressed in a business suit and is cleanly shaven. MILLER is noticeably younger than SMITH, giving the impression that they are fresh from training and lack the experience of their higher ranking colleagues. Police investigator JOHN MILLER is in his late twenties -early thirties, but appears younger due to his lack of practical experience in the field. He seems uncomfortable in the office, despite attempting to mimic the professional attitude employed by SMITH. SMITH continues typing before looking up and standing to address MILLER.
[A CLOSE UP SHOT ON SMITH IS USED DURING THE DEBRIEFING. SHOT-REVERSE-SHOTS ARE USED THROUGHOUT THE CONVERSATION. ENSURE THERE IS AN EYE-LINE MATCH BETWEEN THE CHARACTERS.]
SMITH: John, another body has been found.
MILLER: Another? Are you sure? Do we have any leads this time?
SMITH: The individual who found the body and alerted the police had
sufficient alibis, so at this point in time, we only have one lead. As Fisher
is occupied with a reported missing person case, I need you to help me in leading
this investigation.
SMITH retrieves a plain brown file from a stack of
paperwork on the desk, which he offers to MILLER who has moved closer to SMITH's desk.
[MATCH ON ACTION WHEN THE FILE IS BEING TRANSFERRED FORM SMITH TO MILLER]
As SMITH is talking, MILLER opens the file and begins to leaf through the paperwork, stopping at a picture/ mug shot of a young woman. This is an image of the same woman shown during the opening title sequence in the previous scene.
[A CLOSE UP SHOT OF THE FILE GIVES THE AUDIENCE A CLEAR VIEW OF THE PICTURE OF THE YOUNG WOMAN.]
MILLER: Are you serious? The only suspect we have is a teenage girl?
SMITH looks over MILLER'S shoulder in order to see the image.
[AN OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT MAY BE USED]
SMITH: You should know not to judge a book by its cover. Besides, something doesn’t seem quite right about this girl. She's in holding room three waiting for questioning, come with me.
MILLER follows SMITH as he exits the office.
[THE CAMERA FOCUSES ON THE OFFICE DOOR IN A MEDIUM/ LONG SHOT AS THE POLICE INVESTIGATORS EXIT]
[FADE OUT]:
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